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This is a big poem

WOW!!  Long time no post stuff!! well..

What a tiring day! I just done with my school drama performance, yet I still have my school Fine Art travel that have to be done and I have some bad day for the past few weeks!

Then I made this poem while I was so sad and just really need someone to help me so bad( I went a bit crazy that time)

So, this poem really what I feel at the moment, well not really.

It have to title cause it will be so long title =P

Alone
In a black space
Wonder and wonder

Alone, wonder
In the darkness
Lightning come
Run to touch my heart
Tears of hurts
Run from my eyes

Alone, wonder, hurts
Haunting along the way
As I think
The happiness
Just passed by

Alone, wonder, hurts

Alone…I think
Share it to myself
Find the mistake myself

Wonder…the words they said
Talk until they die
Try making me be prefect
Those useful words

Hurts…as I remember it
Their words
Out from their mouth like rubbish
Talk, yet never show it

I saw, I heard, I feel
Yell, mad, anger, made up stories
Just to get what they want from me
Don’t care how bad my day was
I notice they don’t know me
Even a little thing about me

Now my heart
Just a heart full of hate
Waiting to rise again
A vivid smile
Come and rise me up

I pray, hope, wish
Someone with a charm smile
Joyful heart yet understandable
Come and show me the way
Open their blind heart
Change the sadness
Bring the joy
To the house of four




Comments

  1.    1 nabila says:

    Saw this in math class…hehe. I love this part:
    Just a heart full of hate
    Waiting to rise again
    A vivid smile
    Come and rise me up

    Nice job!!

    Posted April 8, 2008, 9:00 am

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