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My poem

Here’s another poem I made. I was bored in my SS class and this what I did.

LOVE

It gave you peace
But pain real deep inside

Put a smile on my face
Yet it hard to get

Hug him close to me
But time took it away

Don’t want it to be over
It has to go soon or later




Comments

  1.    1 nabila says:

    Really simple but expressful. I like the part:
    Hug him close to me
    But time took it away
    So..touching ;) Thnx for the comment on my blog…hehe..=D

    Posted March 26, 2008, 6:56 pm

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