Happiness

I just reliaze something about feeling called happy. I want to share it in a Poem to make it nice, fancy. Well tell me, is it good?

Happiness

Everyone wants it
Everyone needs it
It come and go like a wind

Left good memories
Want it back
Hard to get

Pressus feeling
Can’t believe it have to go
I wonder where did it go
Saddness took it.
Lonliness took it
Time! Took it

Can I have it back?

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Comments

1 nabila says:

This poem is amazing! Simple but very deep. It’s interesting how so much feeling and power could all be put in just three stanzas. Great post!! =D
Posted March 5, 2008, 5:35 pm
2 ataya says:

Thank you. Well, I don’t think it’s that deep but I’m glad you feel that way. You know when you think about something that is in your mind really deep. Somehow you can act, talk like how you feel at the moment you get it?
Even the words that you say. So people will know what you feel at the moment. so, I was have a bad day. Then I thought why it’s hard to have a happy day.

Then this poem came to my mind.
Posted March 5, 2008, 7:11 pm
3 Ann says:

wow i loved your poem! its really deep and if you read it you can clearly hear who wrote it.
its great the way you change from telling something about happines and ends with it seeming like you lost it, and ending with that question made it really great and it seemed very complete like that.
Posted March 6, 2008, 8:27 pm
4 ataya says:

Thank you Ann. Who you get my blog. I’m so happy that you also like my poem.
Well, really I didn’t really get what you trying to say, but somehow I feel it means something nice and good..hehe
Posted March 9, 2008, 10:13 pm
5 natasha says:

All your poems are truly deep. People wonder where do poets find the words? Well i say they find the words from emotion. You did exactly that.
Posted March 10, 2008, 9:08 pm